I can take little credit for this poem. Except for a few connective phrases I provided, it's made up entirely of phrases and images from the students in Professor Kitsi's Poetry Workshop class at Aristotle University in Thessaloniki, Greece. They all created poems in response to William Carlos Williams's famous piece about the red wheelbarrow and the white chickens. I have merely taken phrases I liked from each of their poems and tried to arrange them in some sort of poetic progression. My apologies to the students for altering some wording slightly and putting their ideas into a different context in order to make the poem work. I hope they will forgive me and can hear the poets inside them speaking in this poem.
A Flock of White Chickens
So much depends upon
your nicotine lips
and a sea of wasted sips.
Upon my looking for a part
to solve the puzzle
of my old square heart.
Upon my hearing a white sparrow
singing in the rhythm
of the leaves.
So much depends upon
silent breaths
in the snow,
the solitude at the heart
of winter-
like a white waterlily
on a long river -
and misty eyes singing
farewell.
Upon a tiny spider
hanging
from a broken lamp
and a shepherd
whistling
his own little tune.
People call it love.
I call it your name.
So much depends upon
the way some people
make your heart
decay
and others
give you a caress
that makes your body
burn.
Upon a caring voice,
a generous smile,
your light blue eyes
a bright blue sky
bright gold sunshine
and a bright moon
and stars that flicker
in a darker sky.
The power of willingness,
a bird’s faith
in its ability
to fly.
So much depends upon
sleep
even when nightmares
are present
and upon smelling white roses
despite the thorns.
Such roses cover lovers’ beds.
So much depends upon
some thoughts next to
the sea
and the waves that compose
the sea
and the black and white
keyboard that plays
the music
in the words you say,
and every note, every word
is a beginning.
No one knows
what is beneath the sea
or what that little bird
is singing as he dances
alone,
stuck in his tree.
So much depends upon
dreams that sing
inside me
after moments we had
together
speaking or not just
speaking,
the silence that accompanies
the break of dawn
and sets fire to my soul.
The fresh air
messes my hair
and fills my heart
with joy.
So much also depends upon
sitting alone
in the attic
or screaming in the middle
of a crowd.
Upon truth seen
through a child’s eyes
or life seen from
a cold bed
in a hospital.
An old lady with arthritic
hands wears a wedding dress.
Girls are laughing
in the forest,
dark tree trunks
and dead leaves
drenched with rain:
the laughter sounds
in the darkness
of your soul.
So much depends upon
these heavy drops
of rain interrupted
by the rising sun
and the mix of colors
that is the rainbow
we can walk on.
So much depends upon
love.
A Flock of White Chickens
So much depends upon
your nicotine lips
and a sea of wasted sips.
Upon my looking for a part
to solve the puzzle
of my old square heart.
Upon my hearing a white sparrow
singing in the rhythm
of the leaves.
So much depends upon
silent breaths
in the snow,
the solitude at the heart
of winter-
like a white waterlily
on a long river -
and misty eyes singing
farewell.
Upon a tiny spider
hanging
from a broken lamp
and a shepherd
whistling
his own little tune.
People call it love.
I call it your name.
So much depends upon
the way some people
make your heart
decay
and others
give you a caress
that makes your body
burn.
Upon a caring voice,
a generous smile,
your light blue eyes
a bright blue sky
bright gold sunshine
and a bright moon
and stars that flicker
in a darker sky.
The power of willingness,
a bird’s faith
in its ability
to fly.
So much depends upon
sleep
even when nightmares
are present
and upon smelling white roses
despite the thorns.
Such roses cover lovers’ beds.
So much depends upon
some thoughts next to
the sea
and the waves that compose
the sea
and the black and white
keyboard that plays
the music
in the words you say,
and every note, every word
is a beginning.
No one knows
what is beneath the sea
or what that little bird
is singing as he dances
alone,
stuck in his tree.
So much depends upon
dreams that sing
inside me
after moments we had
together
speaking or not just
speaking,
the silence that accompanies
the break of dawn
and sets fire to my soul.
The fresh air
messes my hair
and fills my heart
with joy.
So much also depends upon
sitting alone
in the attic
or screaming in the middle
of a crowd.
Upon truth seen
through a child’s eyes
or life seen from
a cold bed
in a hospital.
An old lady with arthritic
hands wears a wedding dress.
Girls are laughing
in the forest,
dark tree trunks
and dead leaves
drenched with rain:
the laughter sounds
in the darkness
of your soul.
So much depends upon
these heavy drops
of rain interrupted
by the rising sun
and the mix of colors
that is the rainbow
we can walk on.
So much depends upon
love.
Thank you for giving the students' images and lines the chance to be involved in such an engaging and creative dialogue with each other. Can't help but think of a piece of prose (coal, yes, but essential, too) talking about poetry: "Was not writing poetry a secret transaction, a voice answering a voice?" (Virginia Woolf, Orlando)
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