While waiting to talk to a poetry teacher about my poems, I suddenly realize I felt like a parent right before a teacher conference about his or her child.
Poet-Teacher Conference
I must say, it is a delight
having your poem in class.
Very bright, very clever, very creative…
but he is also quite easily distracted
and sometimes jumps from subject
to subject without getting his work
done, pursuing every stray image
as if it were a rare butterfly
drifting past the classroom
window and then leading him
to airplanes or old friends or
god knows what.
Also, I’ve had to warn him
about casting himself as the
class clown. Fun is fun,
but poetry is serious
business, and a well-wrought
couplet is worth more than
a verbal hand fart. Still, your
poem is quite popular with
the other verses- if popularity
counts for anything. I just wish
he would stop “borrowing”
things from them. I can’t tell
you the number of metaphors
I’ve caught him “borrowing”,
and then he claims they were
his own to begin with
before he returns them
all bent and mangled.
I think he just wants to fit in,
which is understandable at his age
-after all, he is only a first draft-
but he must realize his own
full potential and make
all this facetious imitation
the road not taken.
Poet-Teacher Conference
I must say, it is a delight
having your poem in class.
Very bright, very clever, very creative…
but he is also quite easily distracted
and sometimes jumps from subject
to subject without getting his work
done, pursuing every stray image
as if it were a rare butterfly
drifting past the classroom
window and then leading him
to airplanes or old friends or
god knows what.
Also, I’ve had to warn him
about casting himself as the
class clown. Fun is fun,
but poetry is serious
business, and a well-wrought
couplet is worth more than
a verbal hand fart. Still, your
poem is quite popular with
the other verses- if popularity
counts for anything. I just wish
he would stop “borrowing”
things from them. I can’t tell
you the number of metaphors
I’ve caught him “borrowing”,
and then he claims they were
his own to begin with
before he returns them
all bent and mangled.
I think he just wants to fit in,
which is understandable at his age
-after all, he is only a first draft-
but he must realize his own
full potential and make
all this facetious imitation
the road not taken.
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